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    ♥ [fanfic] Special A - Unbelievable Sequel Chapter 2 Part 2
    Monday, October 5, 2009 -{'7:54 PM
    /*Sorry to keep you all waiting :) actually I’ve been thinking what will gonna happen to this part and to the succeeding chapters. Hehehe, I’m still having a hard time how to narrate the story and on how will I make the readers be on the character’s shoes’, hehehe. So, here it is the part 2 of my 2nd chapter./*

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    Thoughts. Endless
    Part2


    “Nooooooo!!!!!” a voice roared all over the school and caught the students’ attention while checking the results of the recent quarterly exams.

    Hakusenkan Quarterly Examination Results
    Special A Class

    Rank Math Science History Language
    1. TAKISHIMA, Kei 100+5 100+5 100+5 100+5 100+5
    2. HANAZONO, Hikari 100 100 100100 100
    - Same ranking follows-

    Of course being the usual her, still in – shock, drop jaw looking at the announcement board.
    ‘Why?! Why I can’t beat Takishima, darn!’ she asks herself. Her aura becomes dark, and murmuring words that cannot be understand by anyone whose there. Her face is full red just like a boiling kettle ready to explode anytime.

    ‘Shit! Now, I’m once again defeated by him looks like I’m gon—“ before she could finish what her mind was saying a hot breath touched her left ear, and to her surprise he saw the unbeatable rank number 1, her beloved and rival, Kei Takishima.

    “Congratulations, my beautiful number 2.” Kei greeted her sarcastically but with a bright smile on his handsome face. “Looks like, would be good this day. Remember the challenge that you’ve given me?” he looks at her still smiling.

    “Yeah, I know, you don’t have to remind me.” she said in reply pouting lips, as she accept her defeat.

    ‘Well, no matter what I do, I just can’t defeat my one and only rival. But still, why I am loving the feeling always being defeated by him?’ curiously asking herself again. ‘Maybe I just love him so much to the extent that I don’t care anymore if I’ll be number 1 or not. For now, my goal is to be forever his number 1’ now she smiles.

    “So, you’re the winner what’s your order?” asking him curiously.

    “You’ll find out later.” he answered, and then he gave her a quick smooch on the cheek.

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    At the greenhouse, the 5 members of the SA including Finn are having their tea time. Unusual, Akira serving a very special tea and sandwiches makes the other wonder (except Tadashi, because he is busy eating [always]) what the occasion is.

    “Hey, Akira what’s with the special tea and sandwiches?” Ryuu asked curiously.

    “It’s so surprising that Akira serves this kind of food, especially if Hikari is not around yet.” wrote Megumi on her sketchpad.

    “Werl, itsh mew jend cha jevil mwoman’s wannivw--” Tadashi answered happily while enjoying his very delicious food made by her girlfriend.

    Before he could finish his sentence, Akira grabs a tray and throws it to Tadashi’s face. (Well, this isn’t a new scenario for them.)

    “Yeah Akira, this is kinda new.” Jun smiled.

    “What’s the occasion? Is it your birthday today?” Finn asked.

    Akira blushing and fidgety answers “Uhmmm. Actually--”

    “It’s our special day today.” Tadashi continued since Akira can’t say it and wrapped his right arm around her shoulder smirking.

    “So that explains it :)” Megumi wrote with a smile. And the four congratulate them and eat happily.

    Meanwhile, Akira hasn’t seen Hikari and Kei yet so she starts asking her companions.
    “By the way, I remember, where would be my angel Hikari go? I haven’t seen her yet since this morning.”

    “Me too, but I think we all know who she’s with right now.” Finn sighed.

    “Hikari lost to their challenge so I bet Kei is really having fun today.” Ryuu added while patting Finn’s shoulder and looks at Akira telling them not to worry.

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    “Takishima, aren’t you going to tell me your answer?”

    “You really wanna know?” Kei look at her teasingly.

    “Of course I want to know, so that I’ll be ready. You know, since I’m the one who challenged you but unfortunately I lost, so that’s why I want to know.” she explained shyly.

    Kei just smiled at her. He grabs her hand and led the way to the gate of the school. Hikari was shocked and blushing, wondering where they would be going. All of the students were staring at them enviously. They really look good together, like a pair made in heaven. Every girl wants to be Hikari and every boy wants to be Kei.

    “Looks like everybody is very envious of you and me.” Kei smirks as he looks to Hikari and winks at her. This made her blush even more then smiles back.

    ‘Of all the girls, I’m his number 1. Of all the rich, famous, beautiful girls that drool over this man, I am the one he loves.’ she told herself terribly blushing and she’s controlling herself not to chuckle.

    ‘I’m just way to lucky to have the best of both worlds.’ he thought as he leads the way out the school premises. ‘Well, I don’t mind being rich and famous as long as I’m with the one who can only moves and make my cold heart warm. She’s all I need. She’s all I’ll love.’

    They keep on walking till Kei stopped. Hikari was shocked when she saw where they were standing.

    “Wait for me here.” he said smiling as he turns to face her.

    “Wha—what?! But this is your house! How come--?!” her eyes widened still shocked but before she could react more Kei spoke.

    “I won the challenge, right?” he asked sarcastically.

    “Yes you won, you don’t have to remind me. What I am asking is why we were here in your place?!”

    “I’ll just get my car, we’ll be having a two - day field trip today.”

    “TWO – DAY FIELD TRIP?!?!” she faintly shouted.

    “I knew I was going to win, so I planned this as my prize to your challenge. You’ll know soon where we’re going, I’ve already talked to the principal and submit our excuse letters and asked permission to your parents” he grinned.

    “Nooooooooo!!!”


    To be continued…


    /* Ok, this is the end of my chapter. It’s pretty long and it took me hours to finish this part. I’ll be updating this fanfic maybe next week after our final exam. By the way, sorry for some grammatical errors. And don’t forget to drop your constructive reviews after! Thanks a lot! /*

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